Change from prototype evaluation
The primary finding from the prototype evaluation was that the analogy between a city map and a Cartesian grid was very helpful to the 9th grader, but actually a little confusing to the adult.
To remedy this, this slide:

...needs to be changed.
The way the text guides the student to locate points on the grid is interesting and fun. But this is where the adult tester got sidetracked, remembering things not thought of for a long time, and trying to do extra things. And this action is not needed to make the point of "zero" lines as starting points, at least not in the detail that I used here.
So the diagram should be changed to emphasize "zero" and not the use of the axes to locate points. And the text should also be reworked in the same spirit.
To remedy this, this slide:

...needs to be changed.
The way the text guides the student to locate points on the grid is interesting and fun. But this is where the adult tester got sidetracked, remembering things not thought of for a long time, and trying to do extra things. And this action is not needed to make the point of "zero" lines as starting points, at least not in the detail that I used here.
So the diagram should be changed to emphasize "zero" and not the use of the axes to locate points. And the text should also be reworked in the same spirit.







